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Do Computers Bleed?


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By Luca G., Lombard, IL

     “Brilliant” can only begin to describe how this story was written. Lauren S., I congratulate you, for no other writer has made me laugh as hard, except possibly Al Franken. But seriously, your work is hysterical. The range of emotions that built up as things continued to go awry with the computer were perfectly written.

The story of a procrastinating student who pays the price for that Sunday night essay jam only to have her computer freeze is, of course, a cliché, but here we have an individual who relishes the opportunity to create a melodramatic story about the woes of computers.

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