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Chicken Soup for the Teen Soul Book - Real-Life Stories by Real Teens

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By Catharine L., Belmont, MA

   A poem may come out

in any of three ways:

really good,

really bad,

or mediocre -

a blah-poem,

possibly like this one,

those poems that can take

a thousand revisions

and be neither helped

nor harmed.

Perhaps the ideas are

all right,

but the words, the medium -

they're no good.

They obstruct the meaning

instead of being doorway to it.

The really bad poems are

ejected into the circular file

as soon as the words

sludge onto the hateful page.

(Not that it's the paper's fault.)



But the really good poems

those are the rare gems, pure

sparkle, flowing fluidly from

inspiration to inspiration.

Heaven a breath away

and I hardly know what I'm doing...

I only know that I am a channel

and that everything sounds right the first time

nothing can improve

perfection.






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