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i wanna cry its sooooooooooooooooo beautiful!!!!
im not alone! ur were 10x bettr than me in the 7th grade
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well the design is gorgeous, but if u still draw... try to get the body proportions better.. i mean anime IS exageratted, but u dont want it to look too exagerated. Anime gurls do have big forheads, so try that out..
also... bodies are pretty simply to proportionize, just remember...
elbows are at the diaphram
wrists line ... (more »)
The only thing I wrote in the first place was constructive criticism and I do believe it was good criticism; everything was written to try to improve the drawing. I am not putting down the piece, I'm simply readjusting the perspective from which you see it. I also didn't say that just because it wasn't mind blowing it wasn't good. In fact, right after I mentioned that, I even said "It's a good start." Jesus.
I also suggest checking your spelling and grammar more often.
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