TeenInk If this is the ending of the story, what is the beginning? http://t.co/gRzPosYXRi
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I really like this, it kind of points fun at societies ideals of beauty.
Number 1: you took the pic with a webcam, not something people generally do when promoting their looks.
Number 2: The words are small, and strangely placed, as if you really didn't care, but did have a point to get across.
Sadly, it isn't a woodcut (whatever that is), but everyone makes the mistake of misplaceing an article or artwork at one time or another.
I applaud you.
the reason you're getting ripped on for this is ' cause:
1) you didn't use the right camera (I know its supposed to show "untouched" or "natural" beauty, but it looks like its from a webcam)
2) the words weren't added in a professional looking manner
3) the poem, though short, needs a little more depth
its a great concept and all, and i applaud you on that, its just that the layout isn't exactly aesthically pleasing, but with a little work, you have the potential t... (more »)