Teen Ink

I think that this book was a really well written and great book! You did a good job writing this book.

the book was very good. your emotions really spoke in every word :)

Overall, I enjoyed your story; it was really tense and full of emotion.

I gave it a 4/5, however, because I felt there were a few too many grammatical errors. I don't know if any of these were pointed out, but I'll list a few that I saw. I'm not trying to troll or be obnoxious, I'm just trying to help. :)

There's an incomplete sentence. "As I sat on the school bus for the first time. ..." Try putting a comma in-between these two 'statements.'

I used to do this A LOT, but ... (more »)

I really like your book. And your message not to give up. :)

I loved this book soooo much! Your write with such fluidity and emotion! I could really feel what you were going through. I love it and I would love to see ytou add more chapters :) there are a few grammar errors though. Keep writing :)

I really liked the flow of the words, maybe if you could include more detail we could really picture the scene clearly:)

Thanks I'll check over to make sure

Thanks for what you told me to imorove on

I really enjoyed reading your book read it twice.

The only comment I have is that you need more deatail to make it better  and there are some grammer errors

 

At first it was a little on the boring side. But when I went to the second and third chapter it became very catchy.

I really like your story!