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Serendipidy
Summary: My mom has had psychological problems at least my whole life. It never affected me more than when she stole me from my father, convinced he was abusive. She wanted me all to herself. Little did she know, it wasn't enough. In trying to keep me for herself, she nearly lost me completly
KiraVogt2896
this was so good to read! I'm happy that you shared this! :) <3
imperfectionThis is really good! Really interesting! I think you should go back and add more memories that you have, and talk about how you feel that those experiences have contributed to who you are today. Also, I think you should change the title. *Serendipity sounds sort of like the title of a love story to me. But otherwise, great memoir! Just make it a book!
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