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Shattered Glass This piece has been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.

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He slowly turns the pliers in his hand, curling the wire around itself. With one last squeeze, the next piece of his beach glass mobile is complete. It sparkles as he holds it up to the sun and translucent brown, blue, and green dance across weathered
Photo credit: Jessica F., Bradford, MA
skin.

The soft sound of clinking glass echoes through the workshop. The small room is furnished with a table and a folding chair. Older mobiles hang from the ceiling, moving slightly from side to side. A 25-year-old fan sits in the corner, blowing softly, ruffling the pages of the book emblazoned with a cross that sits on the corner of the table. One framed photograph stands next to the book. It is of a younger man – brown bottle in hand, arms around a smiling woman – grinning into the camera on a picturesque beach. The photograph isn’t there for happy nostalgia. It is a reminder of what he has lost and what he still has to gain.

He pushes his wire-rimmed glasses up his nose and settles into the worn folding chair. He sifts carefully through the round-edged beach glass, looking for the right piece to attach next.

The browns and greens shine back into his eyes. He can still identify the color of glass that each beer brand used for their bottles. This green is for Hefeweizen, this brown for Budweiser. He wonders, as he always does, if these well-washed shards are from bottles he himself carelessly threw into the ocean.

The mobile is for his granddaughter, Andi. Her brother, Gordon, has a similar one – well, he does if Melissa hasn’t thrown it out. He wouldn’t blame his daughter if she had. She has every right to still hate him. She has every right to ignore his existence.

In his daydreams, the lovingly crafted mobiles hang over the cribs. Melissa and her husband might hate them but decide that the children need something of their only living grandparent. Melissa might use them as a lesson: never touch glass bottles; the stuff inside is pure poison.

Another piece is firmly attached, and he checks his watch. His meeting is in an hour. They are going to play cards. His wife loved cards. Every time they play at a meeting, he is reminded of how she had begged him to go to a meeting, to talk to someone, to call his brother, to play chess with Melissa, to take Max hunting for shells, to walk the dog on the beach, to feed the cat, to do anything but drown himself in a brown glass bottle.

He finds another piece of beach glass and carefully inserts a wire in the small hole, threading his past and tying it in a mobile to hang over his granddaughter’s bed, so she might know some day that he never meant to hurt anyone.
This piece has been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.This piece has also been published in Teen Ink's monthly print magazine.

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bowloforanges said...
yesterday at 8:41 pm:

Lovelovelove!

 
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Penelope said...
yesterday at 7:25 pm:

I like stories like that, but I can never write them. keep up the good work!

 
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katty said...
yesterday at 5:34 pm:

Nice. Very thorough, tangible descriptions. It's touching, about the grandfather... Good job!

 
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emilypear said...
yesterday at 4:32 pm:

Thank you.

 
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spitfire213 said...
Feb. 27 at 6:49 pm:

absolutely amazing! i dont think i've ever read anything so down to earth and touching.

 
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krisssss said...
Feb. 27 at 1:13 pm:

This is by far one of the most discriptive pieces of literature I've read. Your vocabulary is incredible and the way your portray the story is amazing. Please keep writing !

 
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Jacobf2 said...
Feb. 27 at 9:15 am:

i love the way you capture the scene with your description, very well written.

 
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blacktwilightfairy13 said...
Feb. 27 at 8:58 am:

WOW! that was beautifully written! you did a very good job with sensory details. i also loved the way you explained what the grandfather has been through in life and how his only family hates him.

 
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juicyfan6 said...
Feb. 18 at 6:39 pm:

This is well written. Nice job. :)

 
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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Feb. 5 at 5:44 pm:

wow. this is truly amazing. ur descriptionz were incredible. So much that I had to remember this waz a fiction article lol. awesome job!

 
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kittkatbar0676 said...
Feb. 5 at 1:32 pm:

Wow... The emotion you crafted so expertly is amazing! It really...really makes one think. Well said! (& the descriptions are amazing!)

 
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Lucky.Deviant said...
Feb. 5 at 11:21 am:

The emotion in this is wonderfully put in. I love the story and the way you infer things like the glass bottles. Very nice, you truly put writing at it's best.

 
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violingoddess said...
Feb. 5 at 10:59 am:

I love the imagry used in this piece! good job, well done :)

 
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~*TheDreamer*~ said...
Jan. 14 at 9:34 pm:

Wow. I can't believe how much emotion and information you can pack into just that many words. Again another reason why I love writing :)

 
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NotEnoughPaper said...
Jan. 14 at 2:53 pm:

Simply put: Amazing!

 
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BookWorm189 said...
Jan. 14 at 8:31 am:

This is simply beautiful!! I love the way it radiates emotion

 
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krzykrys said...
Dec. 23, 2009 at 6:50 pm:

wow thats amazing! the decription in the beginning was just so well explained.

 
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AzureGal said...
Dec. 3, 2009 at 9:54 pm:

It's flawless!! Another! Another!! =)

 
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nocturnne said...
Dec. 1, 2009 at 11:07 pm:

I am in complete agreement with you. Exquisite piece of writing. However, I think it is implied that the grandfather is/was an alcoholic, and the meetings he goes to are AA meetings, because one never ceases to be an alcoholic.

 
nocturnne replied...
Dec. 1, 2009 at 11:08 pm :

Sorry, this was meant to be a response to OliviaW. Clicked the wrong button. Hope it makes more sense now

 
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4everluvjc said...
Dec. 1, 2009 at 7:28 pm:

Wow. I totally get it. Wow. You potrayed it so wonderfully. I am so impressed. It is so complex.

 
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legolas_elf said...
Dec. 1, 2009 at 7:30 am:

i love the writing style, and I'm really in conflict over whether to hate the grandpa or to feel sorry for him i got really sad at the end but the descriptions and the sort of dreamy floating writing style was great good job

 
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Veritytrue said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 6:23 pm:

Wow! This is a beautiful piece of writing! I love your descriptions, your word choice, the way you slowly develop the story and the man's past. This is something worth expanding on, but I also like it just the way it is! Great job!

 
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firstsnowfalls said...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 8:18 pm:

Wonderful! :) bravo!

 
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bamboom212 said...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 7:40 pm:

lol this waz amazing. Very descriptive. I love it.

 
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Oliviaw said...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 5:14 pm:

This was a beautifully crafted piece of work, and I felt very sad towards the end. I don't know if I support the grandfather or dislike him. The writer should have made what the grandfather did exactly to his wife and daughter a little more clearer to make the reader fully understand. But from what I gained in the story, the grandfather killed his wife somehow with the glass, and therefore, his daughter hates him.

 
blacktwilightfairy13 replied...
Feb. 27 at 9:02 am :

I don't think he killed his wife, he wouldn't be looking for glass at the beach, he'd be sitting in jail. I thought maybe he is disliked by his family because he couldn't stop being an alcholic?

 
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25 king said...
Nov. 3, 2009 at 11:26 am:

this story was very well writen idk how you did it so good people should pay to read this omg where are you from france :)

 
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larsennnnn said...
Nov. 3, 2009 at 11:26 am:

omg ur story was amazing your my here i love u so much sincerely brandon allan larsen :)

 
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David Deepwood said...
Nov. 3, 2009 at 11:12 am:

Good story, I think its a success.

 
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ella99 said...
Nov. 3, 2009 at 11:04 am:

good story! i love it l0l

 
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enlightenedbyink said...
Nov. 3, 2009 at 10:29 am:

I loved this story, I understood the hidden message, and thought it was lovely. Thank you for sharing this deep piece of art.

 
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xomolls said...
Sept. 28, 2009 at 7:58 am:

Stunning. The Melancholy undertone is brilliant.

 
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StarSister7 said...
Aug. 28, 2009 at 3:24 pm:

Whoa! That was really good. but what did the guy do that was so bad? i know it had something to do with drinking... but that was really good.

 
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KinseyLlama said...
Aug. 25, 2009 at 3:00 pm:

Oh, wow... That was amazing. I'm inspired. :) Awesome job, awesome writing, awesome subcontext... Awesome. :D

 
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earthgil said...
Aug. 24, 2009 at 4:03 am:

That was beautiful! I loved the hidden message in the unique descriptions! Very inspiring!

 
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Caylee R. said...
Aug. 22, 2009 at 4:40 am:

I myself collect sea glass, this is extremely original. I really liked it, i liked the sad tone it had too.

 
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Inkspired said...
Aug. 18, 2009 at 9:39 pm:

Love it! I particularly like the way you use your language, and only hint at the actual story behind the making of the mobiles.

 
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scoopchloe14 said...
Aug. 10, 2009 at 11:02 pm:

I'm writing a book too, and i wish i had such great writing skills as you have. Your story caught my heart and drug it away.

 
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hideous said...
Aug. 9, 2009 at 4:18 am:

your words charmed me

 
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frozentears said...
Jul. 29, 2009 at 11:33 pm:

It's so well-written...and it's so beautifully though sadly bittersweet. He's an alcoholic isn't he?

 
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.:ArleneNicole:. said...
Jul. 5, 2009 at 8:21 pm:

I liked it.

 
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xInkxBlotxInxAxWhitexFieldx said...
Jul. 3, 2009 at 9:12 pm:

Well-written and the mood was captured flawlessly.

 
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SpecialK8rs said...
Jun. 30, 2009 at 7:25 pm:

Beautifully written, it is very very good!

 
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Zero_Kiryu said...
Jun. 27, 2009 at 11:51 pm:

I loved it, especially the sad nostalgia that practically radiates from this peice. Good work!

ZERO

 
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junie17 said...
Jun. 25, 2009 at 5:16 am:

that was so sweet, and sad. I loved it

 
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lyricist said...
Jun. 24, 2009 at 1:29 pm:

wow really good story.... havent yet read anything that was about a glass maker... or whatever he is.
really original

 
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Valkyrie_123 said...
Jun. 22, 2009 at 1:42 pm:

what a wonderful description i love it!!! :)

 
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casper said...
Apr. 19, 2009 at 7:54 pm:

Lolly! What wonderful descriptions and figurative language; I was immediately drawn into the story!
Do yoy have anything else posted

 
tigeress3 replied...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 5:11 pm :

I love this. It's beautiful and deep without giving too much away.

 
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