I was laying their, barley awake, then I suddenly fall asleep and I am all alone, alone in a big open place. Then I hear, footsteps, fast footsteps I whip around and I see my dead brother, and he looks mad, so I shout “ Tim, stop running!!!” But nothing is coming out of my mouth, I am just thinking it, so he continues running towards me. So I start running, but my legs aren't moving, so I am in freak out mode. Tim is just feats away, then I realize “ wait I am just dreaming this, so I can controle what he can and cannot do.” So I think in my head, stop running, and he stops. I think in my head, run, run as fast as you can. So it works, I am running. But then I think, wait I haven't seen my brother in 3 years, so I go back and I start a conversation. But then, by mistake I think for Tim to start running again. So here I am 3 feet away from him so I think “RUN, RUN FAST” so I am, I am being chased by my dead brother. Then I trip, I look up and, nothing. Tim is gone. He is out of my dream. Then I turn back around and I see my best friend, Victoria standing right there in front of me. She has a knife in her hand, and she looks even madder than Tim did. Then .....
My Dream
its okay not the greatest but it is good
fashionluvr16 said...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 4:40 pm:
Oct. 11, 2010 at 4:40 pm:
Macx14, would you call yourself a fan of me?
Pretty good! Keep this up!
thanks, I will!! Do you like how i left you hanging?
Yeah, that was perfect, and you're welcome! Maybe you could check out some of my stuff, if you wanted. I'd really like your input!



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