There was a deflated balloon by the door. There were bottles, cracked and leaking, on the floor. Curtains ripped, furniture destroyed. What had happened? The door opened as he took a step out onto the moonlit porch where I sat. My head stung with pain at each sound he made. I had only invited five people… how had this party gotten so out of hand? As if to answer my thoughts, he winked as he walked by.
Garnet77
It's so well written and tied together, especially as an assignment! I love how I'm able to infer through your descriptions on what went on. Well done! :)
can_you_keep_a_secret
This was also pretty funny. Pahaha(:
You're pretty good at that you know.
Yea I know... haha just kidding. Thanks for commenting!!! :-)
Odessa_Sterling00You did a good job. You used lots of details which made it a good short story.
rainbowwafflesBeautiful :D
You're lucky your English teacher gives you assignments like that... i never get to do anything like that... I'm jealous XD
Thanks for commenting. And I know, my teacher's awesome!!! :-)
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