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She's a lady

August 13, 2009
By Anonymous

Whatever happened to chilvary? I thought as the bus driver pulled to a complete stop in front of the High School, I was jerked in each direction as everyone slammed off the bus.
I was the last one off, I knew I would be, I was after all the weakest link.
Stepping onto the school grounds I smiled, I had made it this far hadn't I?
Here I come, DrownWood High. I said silently in my mind and my words backfired, because when I looked up too take a deep breath I was knocked too the ground by a hurling football, and a six foot giant.
"dude, did you kill her?" a guy said as the giant football player stood up.
A large gust of air broke through me and I gasped.
"no she's fine." the huge guy said and ran off.
I sat up my head rushing, I looked every which direction, my eyes slowly focusing.
No one seemed too be looking at me, I was a outcast after all, I blew out a sigh, then stood and brushed off, rubbing my head.
I looked over too the front doors but something caught my eye by the willow tree.
It was a guy, and he was staring at me with concern, I stared back, his eye widened slightly as if he were shocked I saw him, then a finger tapped on my shoulder.
"Are you alright,KaDee?" Vyctorea asked seriously.
I'd known Vyctorea for ten years and she was one of the most serious people I knew, I watched as she blew a strand of auburn hair out of her eyes.
"I'm fine." I said then looked over to were the boy was he still gazed over at me. "do you know who that is?"
"who?" Vyc inquired.
"Him..." I murmured pointing, she looked.
"there's no one there, KaDee." she said a eyebrow raised.
"He's right there." I argued.
"maybe you bumped your head harder then you thought." Vyc said softly.
"Calling me crazy?"
"yes."
I glared but then the bell rang and the arguement was put too a stand still.


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on May. 12 2010 at 12:05 am
weebnini DIAMOND, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Done &amp; Over&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Anyone can give up, it&#039;s the easiest thing in the world to do. But to hold it together when everyone else would understand if you fell apart, that&#039;s true strength.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;People should be able to say how they feel. How they really feel. Not, you know, some words that some strangers put in their mouth.&quot;

OH NO!! the story ran out of words!!!!! WRITE MORE PLZ!!! :)

on Apr. 21 2010 at 4:28 pm
JourneyWriter PLATINUM, Joliet, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-<br /> I took the one less traveled by,<br /> And that has made all the difference.<br /> <br /> -Robert Frost

I think everyone is saying the same thing.... lol. this is just a really good piece.

on Apr. 20 2010 at 11:42 pm
CanYouSeeTheCrazy PLATINUM, Cle Elum, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I know why everyone in this world is so desperate to find love.&quot; <br /> &quot;Oh yeah? Why then?&quot; <br /> &quot;Because, it&#039;s the closest thing we have to magic.&quot;

citydancer just read my mind. so interesting so immediately, i want to hear more! =]

on Apr. 20 2010 at 9:21 pm
JourneyWriter PLATINUM, Joliet, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-<br /> I took the one less traveled by,<br /> And that has made all the difference.<br /> <br /> -Robert Frost

please please continue it!!!! you've got me wanting more!!!!really good start. keep it up! i want to know what happens next!

on Apr. 20 2010 at 8:41 pm
Oh my gosh I know. The 'too's bothered me sooo much. Hahaha I'm so technical when it comes to spelling and grammar. I didn't exactly love this story..certainly doesn't deserve #1...I don't even get it! ;P

on Apr. 20 2010 at 7:44 pm
Lovejunkie123, East Meadow, New York
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Hear the rest so please cont. it

on Apr. 20 2010 at 7:43 pm
Lovejunkie123, East Meadow, New York
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I loved it but i want to haer the reat please cont. it

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on Apr. 20 2010 at 8:40 am
SageSin GOLD, Oaklawn, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Accept everything about yourself. I mean everything. You are you, and that is the beginning and the end; No apologies, no regrets.&quot;

BEAUTIFUL!

on Mar. 29 2010 at 5:59 pm
CardinalRunner BRONZE, Holland, Michigan
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Agreed, the "too's" bothered me so much when its supposed to be "to." I dont really understand this I think t couldve been way better..

on Mar. 29 2010 at 4:35 pm
ClockworkLightbulb SILVER, Nottingham, Other
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Number. * :)

on Mar. 29 2010 at 4:34 pm
ClockworkLightbulb SILVER, Nottingham, Other
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No offence but I dont really get why this is nubmer one.

There are a lot of spelling mistakes and the story itself seems pointless?


on Mar. 29 2010 at 3:44 pm
MusicIsLife013 SILVER, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Light, like the flutter of wings, feel your hollow voice rushing into me<br /> As you&#039;re longing to sing&quot; -AFI<br /> <br /> &quot;Here we go again, I kinda wanna be more than friends, so take it easy on me I&#039;m afraid you&#039;re never satisfied.&quot; -Neon Trees

they was really good! :)  please check out some of my work

on Mar. 29 2010 at 1:42 pm
HeyAmanda SILVER, Rancho Cucamonga, California
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it was good and i liked how you made the spelling different but i kinda dont like the end cuz it makes it seem like a sci fi not romance and i  don't think the title fits

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on Mar. 29 2010 at 3:43 am
hepburn, Assd, Other
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Favorite Quote:
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thanks for the links :)

TheObvious said...
on Mar. 13 2010 at 7:36 am
well...there were a number of spelling and grammatical errors that you did overlook. im sorry, sometimes i just cant look past hypocrisy.

on Mar. 7 2010 at 1:53 pm
imnotjaye SILVER, Los Angeles, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We live in an age when unnecessary things are our only necessities.&quot;<br /> Oscar Wilde<br /> Irish dramatist, novelist, &amp; poet (1854 - 1900)

i rly liked it... but the title dosent rly suit it well

on Mar. 7 2010 at 10:29 am
adigitaldreamer2 BRONZE, Vienna, West Virginia
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It's a nice start, and I like it. But maybe something a little more creative would do you some good. I like your style and were real creative on the names. I like that. Don't stop writing! :) God Bless

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on Feb. 21 2010 at 4:03 pm
Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; Always do right. This will gratifiy some people and astonish the rest.&quot; Mark Twain

This is amazing I'd love to hear more!

on Jan. 28 2010 at 2:31 pm
BrittneyCloud SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Dont tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon!&quot;

OMG is there a second part to this? i would love to read more

on Jan. 22 2010 at 3:38 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent.&quot;<br /> &quot;You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel.&quot;

ooo i really like this. its kinda like a mystery. i agree wit little-miss-sunshine. want more! ;)