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She's a lady

August 13, 2009
By Anonymous

Whatever happened to chilvary? I thought as the bus driver pulled to a complete stop in front of the High School, I was jerked in each direction as everyone slammed off the bus.
I was the last one off, I knew I would be, I was after all the weakest link.
Stepping onto the school grounds I smiled, I had made it this far hadn't I?
Here I come, DrownWood High. I said silently in my mind and my words backfired, because when I looked up too take a deep breath I was knocked too the ground by a hurling football, and a six foot giant.
"dude, did you kill her?" a guy said as the giant football player stood up.
A large gust of air broke through me and I gasped.
"no she's fine." the huge guy said and ran off.
I sat up my head rushing, I looked every which direction, my eyes slowly focusing.
No one seemed too be looking at me, I was a outcast after all, I blew out a sigh, then stood and brushed off, rubbing my head.
I looked over too the front doors but something caught my eye by the willow tree.
It was a guy, and he was staring at me with concern, I stared back, his eye widened slightly as if he were shocked I saw him, then a finger tapped on my shoulder.
"Are you alright,KaDee?" Vyctorea asked seriously.
I'd known Vyctorea for ten years and she was one of the most serious people I knew, I watched as she blew a strand of auburn hair out of her eyes.
"I'm fine." I said then looked over to were the boy was he still gazed over at me. "do you know who that is?"
"who?" Vyc inquired.
"Him..." I murmured pointing, she looked.
"there's no one there, KaDee." she said a eyebrow raised.
"He's right there." I argued.
"maybe you bumped your head harder then you thought." Vyc said softly.
"Calling me crazy?"
"yes."
I glared but then the bell rang and the arguement was put too a stand still.


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on Jan. 22 2010 at 1:54 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

AMAZING! That's all I have to say. Oh, and that I want more.

on Jan. 3 2010 at 3:55 pm
swim4ever SILVER, Carol Stream, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;you can throw in the towel or you can use it to wipe the sweat off your face&quot;<br /> &quot;no one ever drown in their own sweat&quot;

wow who ever wrote this i want to read something else you wrote it was great :0)

on Dec. 31 2009 at 12:39 pm
justbreathe.... BRONZE, N/a, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how bad things get, there is always something that you don\&#039;t know about just yet.

I love it! It really draws me in. I am literally like excited about this piece! But I agree it is too short, mostly because I want more. Why don't you write more? Maybe about a romance with this boy who supposedly isn't there. And he could be very chivalrous.

on Dec. 31 2009 at 12:37 pm
justbreathe.... BRONZE, N/a, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how bad things get, there is always something that you don\&#039;t know about just yet.

It's very well written and appealing. I love it! But I agree that it's too short, mostly because I want more. Write more, maybe about a romance with this boy who supposedly isn't there.

on Dec. 31 2009 at 9:36 am
G.M.Palacio SILVER, Bayamon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Being happy doesn&#039;t mean everything is perfect. It means you&#039;ve decide to see beyond the imperfections.

She's a Lady part two:
http ://www.teenink .com /fiction/romance/article/132354/Shes-A-Lady-part-two/
She's a Lady part 3:
http ://www.teenink .com /fiction/romance/article/145299/Shes-a-lady-part-three/?page=1

smart4life said...
on Dec. 9 2009 at 12:05 pm
It's sort of too short. and not romantic

on Oct. 26 2009 at 1:07 pm
phoenixqueen GOLD, Idaho Falls, Idaho
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&quot;I cannot live without books.&quot;

it is chivalry, not chilvary. I'm sorry, I just had to point that out. Sometimes I can't look past spelling errors.

on Oct. 3 2009 at 11:40 am
Fredwardness SILVER, Romeo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The stars are blazing like rebel diamonds cut out of the sun&quot; -The Killers (Read My Mind)<br /> <br /> &quot;If you don&#039;t know where you&#039;re going, any road will take you there.&quot; -George Harrison

lol dont be sorry, i do have my eyes peeled tho. thx =)

BreeLee BRONZE said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 8:55 am
BreeLee BRONZE, Springdale, Arkansas
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I'm the writer. ;P I've already posted Shes a Lady part two. You'll just have too find it sorry

on Oct. 3 2009 at 8:32 am
SilverAngel SILVER, West Carollton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is an open book, we take the journey until the end.&quot; ~Me

Yes, write more. There are a lot of grammatical errors which might be fixed but I loved it!

on Oct. 2 2009 at 6:08 pm
Fredwardness SILVER, Romeo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The stars are blazing like rebel diamonds cut out of the sun&quot; -The Killers (Read My Mind)<br /> <br /> &quot;If you don&#039;t know where you&#039;re going, any road will take you there.&quot; -George Harrison

i agree, please write more it ended to soon

on Oct. 2 2009 at 8:10 am
AmandaLee143 SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Always Believe :)

wow !! i loved it !! :) great idea

Bookaddict said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 5:15 pm
I love this idea!! PLEASE write more!

Second52 said...
on Sep. 7 2009 at 8:22 pm
woow i love it :))) cn u write more please!!!

BreeLee BRONZE said...
on Sep. 7 2009 at 1:58 pm
BreeLee BRONZE, Springdale, Arkansas
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Don't worry I posted number two of this there's more

on Sep. 6 2009 at 10:24 pm
booksarelife4me SILVER, Lutherville, Maryland
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&quot;Forgive and Forget and Never Regret.&quot;~A old friend

wow loved it! you need to write more!

on Sep. 4 2009 at 1:27 pm
Okaaaay, so, I loved this. :) It's too short, though! You should write some more. And I was pretty shocked at the ending. "....my words backfired, because when I looked up too take a deep breath I was knocked too the ground by a hurling football, and a six foot giant." I laughed really hard at that part. Haha.

on Sep. 4 2009 at 4:55 am
ZebraWithoutStripes ELITE, Blue Springs, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
To make a difference in the world, you have to be different from the world.

you should totally make this into a full story or something. i love it!

on Sep. 2 2009 at 10:18 pm
BellaLuna1 BRONZE, Ozone Park, New York
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wow. i liked it u got me hooked writting anything more to this? like the spelling of vyctoria to that was cool!