We sat there on his balcony looking at the stars on a summer night. The night sky is pitch black, well is suppose to be, the stars make the sky brighter. All of a sudden his arm went around my waist and that shocked me. It was unexpected. I didn't know what to say. I turned around to find his shining blue eyes staring down at me. I was speechless. The love that was in his eyes, it made skin tingle in a good way. I was afraid what will happen next so I turned away and looked at the sky. "Hey is that the big dipper over there?" I asked. I really didn't see the big dipper I just wanted to say something to break that seemed like an everlasting silence. " No thats the not the big dipper." He said queitly and content. Then he moved the arm the was around my shoulders to my waste as he moved a little bit closer.I felt his eyes staring at me trying to read my expression, my mind. A shiver sped down my spine as he started caressing my back. I turned to stare back at him not expecting anything. Until he kissed me and his lips stayed on mine for what seemed like a forever. It was so tender. caring and soft. Just like what I hoped my first kiss to be like. When it was over I knew everything had just changed between us and that made me a bit scared.
My First Kiss
Sweet. I love it. In my works, all of the first kisses are sweet, probably because that's how I hope mine will be.
wow that was awesome! i definitely wanna have a kiss like that sometime :) not my first though...i wanna keep that one in my memories :)
My first kiss was at a bowling alley, and my friends kept trying to watch lol. Turns out the guy was a real jerk and cheated on me. But I really liked this story :D
My fist kiss was under a sewage bridge in sixth grade. We talked about it before we actually kissed and had to count to three before our lips met. Oh, and my friend was trying to peek through a crack in the bridge to see. And some little kids saw and went "EW!". I'm glad to see that there are others with awful first kisses out there. :)
My First Kiss was in middle school on a tree at the park. At the time I thought it was icky and wet and I hated it. XD lol
just like a fairytale...
but fairytales are just fairytales, after all.
i bet it was magical...i wish my first kiss was like that
I L O V E D it! Super cute! I wish my first kiss had been something like that ;)
I'm new here and a couple of weeks ago i posted some of my work. Please read?
http://www.teenink.com/fiction/romance/article/189455/In-the-end/
you just decribed one of the most perfect first kisses!!!! :) :)
i wish my 1st kiss would be lyk dat!! luv it alot!!
wonderful wrk..realy cute :)
thnx but i am upset that i got confised and spelled "waste" instead of "waist"
dn't hav to be upset abt it...relax,every1 make mistakes...n spelling errors are the most common once,so jus chill:) ur article is wonderful,it jus makes u wanna read more n more...:) gr8 wrk:)
Fantastic! I wish my first kiss had been like that. It sucked.



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