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My First Kiss

September 8, 2009
By Anonymous

We sat there on his balcony looking at the stars on a summer night. The night sky is pitch black, well is suppose to be, the stars make the sky brighter. All of a sudden his arm went around my waist and that shocked me. It was unexpected. I didn't know what to say. I turned around to find his shining blue eyes staring down at me. I was speechless. The love that was in his eyes, it made skin tingle in a good way. I was afraid what will happen next so I turned away and looked at the sky. "Hey is that the big dipper over there?" I asked. I really didn't see the big dipper I just wanted to say something to break that seemed like an everlasting silence. " No thats the not the big dipper." He said queitly and content. Then he moved the arm the was around my shoulders to my waste as he moved a little bit closer.I felt his eyes staring at me trying to read my expression, my mind. A shiver sped down my spine as he started caressing my back. I turned to stare back at him not expecting anything. Until he kissed me and his lips stayed on mine for what seemed like a forever. It was so tender. caring and soft. Just like what I hoped my first kiss to be like. When it was over I knew everything had just changed between us and that made me a bit scared.

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This is how i wanted my first kiss to be like.
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DifferentTeen PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 17 2011 at 7:50 pm
DifferentTeen PLATINUM, Seaford, Delaware
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I don't even know the name of the guy my first kiss was with. So I don't really count it, my official first kiss has to be perfect. (:
Pickles-29 said...
on Mar. 17 2011 at 4:37 pm
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I love this. thats how i would want my first kiss!
KelleySchorn SILVER said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 2:49 pm
KelleySchorn SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
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aww thats how i want my first kiss to be too!!! :)) so sweet and gentle :) sigh...:)
TheListener said...
on Dec. 19 2010 at 3:59 pm
haha I thought of that song too and just randomnly started singing it. 
incognito562 said...
on Nov. 27 2010 at 9:22 pm
incognito562, Long Beach, California
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i would love this story to be continued :)
Russelsgurl said...
on Nov. 27 2010 at 2:59 pm
I trully loved this article. It reminded me of the night that i got my first kiss with my current boyfriend. And to all you haters out there, don't just dog on the spelling errors. This story(pending the grammatical errors) evoked the essence of what i thought was a heartfelt, loving story of the beggining of a relationship.If the girl who wrote this extended it into a novel, i belive that it would hit the NewYork Time Bestseller list, so just keep rooting her to write more.
KyraJ said...
on Nov. 27 2010 at 10:20 am
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awww

i loved that...it was so sweet :D

im really happy now lool

hannerbanners BRONZE said...
on Nov. 27 2010 at 12:48 am
hannerbanners BRONZE, Monroe, Washington
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i love this its so emotional its just so great i love it<3
Berta BRONZE said...
on Oct. 14 2010 at 3:39 pm
Berta BRONZE, Somewhere, Massachusetts
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Nice job.  Sounds really good.
KellyR GOLD said...
on Oct. 14 2010 at 12:55 pm
KellyR GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
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My First Kiss was in middle school on a tree at the park. At the time I thought it was icky and wet and I hated it. XD lol
KellyR GOLD said...
on Oct. 14 2010 at 12:52 pm
KellyR GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
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lol When i read the title of this, I was like wow I have to comment those song lyrics! XD
MosoSem GOLD said...
on Oct. 14 2010 at 9:37 am
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Hey me too! My first kiss went a little like this!*mwah* and twist! *mwah* and twist!
KelsieYellow said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 2:41 pm
the first thing that popped in my head was that song
DarkMountain BRONZE said...
on Jul. 16 2010 at 11:57 pm
DarkMountain BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
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No offense, but you kinda ruined your point about the spelling mistakes by spelling "grammar" incorrectly :D
rain-rain111 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 2:50 am
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TeenInk.com/fiction/romance/article/228568/First-Kiss/

THIS IS A BETTER VERSION THAT I WROTE :) CHECK IT OUT.

rain-rain111 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 10 2010 at 4:51 pm
rain-rain111 PLATINUM, Roselle, Illinois
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HEY PEOPLE I RE-WROTE THIS STORY WITH NO ERRORS AND MORE EMOTION HERE IS THE LINK:

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taylorf463 GOLD said...
on Jun. 26 2010 at 10:16 pm
taylorf463 GOLD, Marion, Kentucky
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Me too!!! lol!
ssophiaa GOLD said...
on Jun. 26 2010 at 9:30 pm
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My fist kiss was under a sewage bridge in sixth grade. We talked about it before we actually kissed and had to count to three before our lips met. Oh, and my friend was trying to peek through a crack in the bridge to see. And some little kids saw and went "EW!". I'm glad to see that there are others with awful first kisses out there. :)
ssophiaa GOLD said...
on Jun. 26 2010 at 9:27 pm
ssophiaa GOLD, Falls Church, Virginia
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Cute, but there are millions of stories about perfect, expectant, dreamed up first kisses. Don't write about what you hope it will be like, write about what you think it will be like. Realistically.
OfficialApprover PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 26 2010 at 9:09 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Thank you:)