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EC+AM=4ever Chapter 12 Part 2

September 24, 2009
By TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.


My cell phone buzzed and I glanced over at it, not wanting to talk to anyone. But when I saw that it was Kristy calling me, I picked up right away. "Hi, Kristy,"

"Hi, Evalynne." She sounded a bit tense.

"What's up?" I asked.

"I'm at Sadie's right now. Well..." she trailed off at the end. "Why don't you just come and meet me?"

"Ok," I replied, confused. We both hung up and I went downstairs. I slipped on a pair of flip flops and called out, "Mom, I'm going to Sadie's!" Then I walked out the door.

When I walked into Sadie's, I saw Kristy sitting at a table. I walked over to her, "Why'd you want me to meet you here?" I asked.

She bit her lip, "Look at the table in the back corner." she murmured as I sat down.

I looked over to find Julianne sitting at the table. And Ash was sitting across from her. She was twirling her hair and talking to him while he listened. And her hand was set on the table, with Ash's hand placed on top of it.

My eyes widened in shock. Then I turned back to face Kristy, luckily Ash hadn't noticed me. "Oh my gosh," I said to myself.

"I can't believe Ash is cheating on you." Kristy told me.

"He's not. I broke up with him earlier today." I replied.

"Why'd you do that?" she asked.

"Because I felt bad because we were dating behind his mom's back. He pretended to choose her so we could date while she was at work. But I saw the look on her face when she thought he'd chosen her. She was truly happy."

"So your guilt got the best of you?"

"Yeah, but I didn't think that Ash would move on so quickly. I thought he actually loved me." And then tears came to my eyes. "But I was obviously mistaken." Then I stood up and left the restaurant.

When I got home, I ran up to my room, locked the door, and cried. "Sweetie, are you ok?" Mom asked from outside my room.

"Just leave me alone!" I shouted.

"Evalynne, open up the door. We can talk about this. What happened?" she asked.

I stalked over to my door and yanked it open. "Ash has a new girlfriend. He never loved me and he never will, ok? There's nothing left to talk about!" Then I slammed the door shut.

I had never yelled at my mom like that before. And I felt bad, especially since this wasn't her fault, but I couldn't help it. I was so stupid for thinking that Ash really loved me. I should have known that he would end up with Julianne. She was popular, beautiful, a cheerleader. Her and Ash were meant to be.

My phone buzzed, it was Kristy. I picked up but didn't say anything.

"Evalynne, are you ok?" she asked me.

"No," I choked out in between sobs.

"Do you want me to come over?"

"No,"

"Well is there anything I can do to help?" she said with concern in her voice.

"No,"

"Can you say anything besides no?"

"Yes,"

She laughed softly and then sighed. "Well if you want to talk or anything, just call me. I'm still your best friend."

"Ok," I replied, feeling a tiny bit better since Kristy and I were still friends. "And Kristy, I'm sorry. You're a true friend, and Ash isn't. He never was. He told me loved me and I was stupid enough to believe him."

"Evalynne, don't beat yourself up over this." she told me.

"But it's my own fault! If I hadn't fallen for him, I wouldn't be sitting in my room, crying right now! He played me like a fool. And I fell for him."

"Well it's not your fault that Ash is a jerk. He's a player and he doesn't deserve you. Just forget about him." she said.

"I can't just forget, Kristy. I trusted him." I cried.

"I know that, but he's not even worth your time. So just forget him. And you shouldn't love him anymore either. If he can move on that easily, so can you."

"I don't love him, Kristy. I love who I thought he was." I told her. "A part of me still thinks that he loves me, that him and Julianne aren't together. But then reality takes over and I realize that he's gone."

"I'm sorry." she said. "But I'm your friend and I'm going to help you through this." she assured me.

"I know." Then I heard a laugh, Julianne's laugh. I looked over to find Ash's window open. Him and Julianne were walking into his room, talking. "Oh my gosh, he really hates me."

"What are you talking about?" she asked.

"His window is open and him and Julianne just walked in." I replied.

"Then shut your window. Don't let him get to you." she told me.

"Too late," I glanced back out my window. They were paying absolutely no attention to me. "I have to go now." And without waiting for a reply, I hung up.

I stood up and approached my window. And as I began to shut it, Julianne called out to me. "Hi, Evalynne!" She smirked when she saw my tear-streaked face.

I looked at Ash and he met my gaze. His eyes were dark and unfamiliar. Not the happy, sparkly blue eyes I'd come to know so well. "Hi." I replied blankly.

"Ash and I are going out now. Sorry about you're break-up." she said without meaning it.

"It's ok. I just hope you two are happy together. You're meant for each other." Then I shut my window and pulled down my blinds.

When my window was open, I had spotted Ash's mom's car in the driveway. She allowed Julianne to come into her house. She allowed her to be with Ash. She thought that Ash and Julianne were right for each other.

But two wrongs don't make a right.


The author's comments:
Here's part 2 of chapter 12! Who'd have ever thought that Ash and The Wicked Witch of Westchester would end up together? Evalynne certainly didn't.

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PoisonLove said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 9:18 pm
PoisonLove, Roselle, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Lifes no always the party we hoped fr but while we're here we might as well dance.

Yea but I didn't even think of just a dream but so true I love ghost of you though it's one of my favorite songs :D but it's rlly sad D:

on Jan. 19 2010 at 11:14 am
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

ok, so i just went on youtube and watched the music video for that song and you're TOTALY RGHT!!!! it fits it perfectly! lol, the song that i always thought went perfectly with this is just a dream by carrie underwood. but ghost of you goes really well with it too. :)

on Jan. 19 2010 at 11:13 am
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

ok, thanx for the advice :)

on Jan. 17 2010 at 9:28 pm
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

I've never heard that song before. But I'll go on playlist .com right now and check it out. :)
And another song that I think goes perfect with this story is Just A Dream by Carrie Underwood. It fits the ending so well! :)

PoisonLove said...
on Jan. 17 2010 at 2:34 pm
PoisonLove, Roselle, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Lifes no always the party we hoped fr but while we're here we might as well dance.

Oh my gosh I know the perfect song for this story. Ghost of You by My Chemical Romance! It fits so well

PoisonLove said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 11:58 pm
PoisonLove, Roselle, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Lifes no always the party we hoped fr but while we're here we might as well dance.

Lol that's awsome when I write I normally just have some spontanious passion to write about something but we all have ourways lolz

on Jan. 16 2010 at 10:59 pm
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

to be honest, i'm really not sure how i came up with any of the characters. in fact, when i started writing this, i didn't even have a plot line or anything. i just got bored & wanted to start a new story, so i started this one & before i knew it, i was getting really far in it & i actually had a plot and characters. lol :)

PoisonLove said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 8:31 pm
PoisonLove, Roselle, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Lifes no always the party we hoped fr but while we're here we might as well dance.

Yea I really loved it but I was team Ash it really made me like Cole more cuz he was just so sweet but I'm still team Ash and it was amazing beyond belief like I totally loved it. I just kinda wanna know how you came up with Ash and Cole's characters

on Jan. 16 2010 at 4:13 pm
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

yeah, i made the ending pretty sad, but it just made me like ash more becuz before i wrote the ending, i was team cole. i'm so glad that you liked it though! thanks so much for reading it! :)

PoisonLove said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 12:24 pm
PoisonLove, Roselle, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Lifes no always the party we hoped fr but while we're here we might as well dance.

Oh my gosh it was so good but so sad I cried so much and then end made me love Cole even more and ash will forever be amazing

PoisonLove said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 10:05 am
PoisonLove, Roselle, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Lifes no always the party we hoped fr but while we're here we might as well dance.

Oh my gosh Ty I'm going to go read it right now!!!

on Jan. 15 2010 at 1:55 pm
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

well i actually just posted the entire thing on quizilla. and there's a total of 49 chapters. i kinda wish i could've made it a little longer, but i think that i ended it at the right time. i hope you like the ending of it :)

PoisonLove said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 12:47 pm
PoisonLove, Roselle, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Lifes no always the party we hoped fr but while we're here we might as well dance.

Yea no problem I can't wait till you post more

on Jan. 15 2010 at 12:10 pm
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

that's awesome, it really is! i'm just so completely and utterly thrilled that you like it so much! thank you! :)

PoisonLove said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 6:50 pm
PoisonLove, Roselle, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Lifes no always the party we hoped fr but while we're here we might as well dance.

I absolutly love it and I've already started rereading what you have on the sites it's so amazing

on Jan. 14 2010 at 6:02 pm
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

wow, thanks so much!!!! it's awesome that you like my story!!! :)

PoisonLove said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 4:03 pm
PoisonLove, Roselle, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Lifes no always the party we hoped fr but while we're here we might as well dance.

Haha I read all that u had posted on quizilla and I'm dying to know what happens and ur an amazing writer you are gunna accomplish ur dreams deffinitly I've told like all my friends to read this and I'm team ash btw I love Cole but ash is amazing beyond belief

on Jan. 13 2010 at 3:19 pm
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

omg, thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much!!! you have no idea how much your support means to me! to be a writer is my dream so i'm SOOOOOOOO thrilled that you like my writing! thank you SOOOOOOOO much! and yeah, i do have more posted on here. i think i have it posted up to chapter 23, but i have this story posted up to chapter 37 on this website called quizilla .com . thank you once again!!!! :)

PoisonLove said...
on Jan. 13 2010 at 12:17 am
PoisonLove, Roselle, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Lifes no always the party we hoped fr but while we're here we might as well dance.

Omg plz write more if you ever publish this just make sure you know I bought a copy and read it s million tines haha but plz write more I'm dieing to know what happens I read this in 2 hours I will probaly rea it ten more times and ash a that oter little witch of a girl oh gosh no if they don't break up I will be in shock but I love it love it love it by far much better then twilight and that's saying a lt from me cuz i love twilight

eMiLyP GOLD said...
on Dec. 30 2009 at 10:17 am
eMiLyP GOLD, Jeannette, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Life is short; speak your mind, say what ya wanna say, and do what ya wanna do (as long as you don't get caught!).

I'm that way with some of my characters in my stories, too.