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Today, I made a boy out of pillows and old clothes to look like you.
I told him that I liked his eyes, that they were a spectacular shade of blue. He did not ­compliment me back.
I read him my poetry. He did not offer me a ­critique or wild exclamations of how much he loved my writing. Instead, he stayed quiet.
I walked with him in the woods behind my house. He did not try to hold my hand.
I baked him a lovely chocolate cake – your ­favorite. He did not flatter my delicious ­baking skills.
And when he grew tired I set him down next to me on the bed. He did not caress me, he did not kiss me, he did not whisper sweet nothings in my ear, and he did not tell me that he loved or needed me.
Yes, I made a boy out of pillows today. He doesn't just look like you; he acts like you, too.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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FakesmileThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 6:47 pm:
I love it! Great job, keep writing you are fantastic!!!!!! :)
 
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youngwriter10 said...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 8:56 pm:
I really like this you're a great writer. This reminds me of someone I know.... :)
 
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UnwantedNinja said...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 2:13 pm:
This is amazingly writtin !!!! love it a lot <3 reminds me of .....
 
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songbird13 said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 11:55 am:

your pillow boy reminds me of someone I know...

 

 
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Jazzyjaz12 said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 2:47 pm:
i have a question i'm new but so if i put my work out here will people take it and use it as there own??? I'm just wondering i'm hesitant
 
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LiberianBaddThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 12:02 pm:
O MY GOSH I LUVVV THIS .... when i read it i started to smile ......great work
 
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emattox said...
Nov. 17, 2011 at 6:55 pm:
OH OH BURNN! This poem made me laugh :)
 
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Dreamgirl95 said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 7:52 pm:
Awwww... So sad. Great writing though:)
 
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Cheyenne G. said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 7:30 am:
aww poor thing
 
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asoulch said...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 11:25 am:
I really liked this!  Very simple and cute and has a nice point to it.
 
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SamNSox14This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 8:26 am:
The ending is so powerful, it wraps the whole thing together very well. It is written with simplicity, but is still a very great piece. 
 
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purple17 said...
Oct. 4, 2011 at 6:51 pm:
really good loved it alot describes many expiriences
 
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prettylittlewriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 14, 2011 at 10:00 pm:
wow, that was good. very simple and to the point. lots of boys are like that! :) i know ur exact feeling. 
 
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rosaposa said...
Sept. 12, 2011 at 7:28 pm:
this was so good! I wasn't expecting the ending to be like that at all. so GOOD!
 
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*imagine_that* said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 5:04 pm:
DANG!!! SOOOO POWERFUL....:))))
 
ArrowHeart replied...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 7:58 pm :
HAHAHAHAHAHHA FUNNY!!!
 
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atimm2013 said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 9:11 pm:
i love this! i love how at the end, you did the opposite of what i was expecting!
 
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Dancing2222This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 4:28 pm:
oooo...Me like:)
 
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BrittyBroo said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 3:18 pm:
At first I thought that it was a bit creepy but then it turned out REALLY good :D
 
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Steph0804 said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 11:13 pm:
I thought you would say something about how this pillow-boy looked like you but would never be you and yada yada, but the sort of ironic twist at the end is EXCELLENT. :)
 
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