It was just me and you. When you told me you loved me. You told me we were forever. Just Emma and Caleb. That's what you told me. But what I wonder is why you lied to me. Why would you tell me something that was so untrue? Why would you rip my heart out of my chest for her? Tell me was she really worth it? Was that one time with her worth all our memories? All our great times together? I don't think so, but it wasn't my decision. Tell me did you really think I would never know? Well that was stupid considering it was my best friend. How stupid. I don't know how I ever loved you. With all your lies and deception. You told me you where going to write the story of us someday. But it looks like I beat you to it. And now it's to late. Because the story of us is over.
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Lol. "But it looks like I beat you to it." Game over.
I agree with Daniel that this was quite engaging. And actually a new perspective of the "break-up". Instead of grieving and questioning herself, your "character" realizes the insignificance of the whole thing and rightfully places the blame on the other participant. Finally lol
DanielMThat's wassup. This was really engaging. at first I was like oh another break up story. But yours was really good it got me to think your end was awesome. Suggestion add a little bit of detail.
thanks dawin :) lol its not true i just made this up. lol
dreamer7697 said...
Jun. 10, 2012 at 3:04 pm:
Jun. 10, 2012 at 3:04 pm:
I liked it emma:) great job !!!
vazenitran98Nice and intrigueing. Not really a story,but I did enjoy the concept of the point. This was great. Write more,like I tell almost everyone because people have great talents within them and I hope yours is one that would finally turn into something big!
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