Nov. 19, 2009 at 9:40 am
I totally agree.Each diffeerent poem is distictive in it's own little way.Te sit ei sfor people to comment, whether its good or bad,so that people will know what they need to do, what not to do, and what to work on more.It also doesnt help that people expect to get all of their a hundred posted writings commented on when they don't even take the time to comment on anyone elses. So people won't know if there piece is "good" or "bad" because no one has enough heart to let people know their piece isn't as good as they think.
Apr. 15, 2010 at 10:06 am
Shattered glass on the floor,
A sheet instead of a door,
Bugs and rats I cabinets with no cover,
This is how I lived just me and my brother,
Times were hard so I thought then,
But the bad hadn’t even begin,
Bruises and tears on my face,
I’d rather be dead than go back to that place,
I sit here today with my head held high,
But when I think of this my head goes down and I cry,
Shadows creep towards my dreams,
And wipe away every thing and it makes me throw out screams,
I wish I hadn’t gone through this,
But now I look at it as that’s what made me strong,
I will not break down even if it all goes wrong.