Wed May 22, 2013 8:48am 
Jan. 17 at 10:05 am
I happen to be a VIP and i would love to give advice and read your work :) And i have 11 articles so if you like to read poems you can read some of mine and tell me what you think if you don't thats ok :)
Jan. 19 at 12:06 am
I'd appreciate it if you'd look at some of my work! :)
Jan. 19 at 3:50 pm
I'd love if you could give me some advice on mine!! (:
Jan. 19 at 5:18 pm
Here is the start to one of my songs:
Chorus: And I love you every minute every hour. I even think about you in the shower. No matter what I do my mind is ruled thoughts of you. So baby this song is my love letter. Cause when I look at you my heart starts to flutter
When I look at you my spine sends out a quick shudder.
1st verse:
I see you standing over there on the street corner smiling like you do.
You caught my eye and I won’t lie you never let it go.
I must admit when I got bit by the love bug
I think it saved my life.
And I love you every minute every hour. I even think about you in the shower. No matter what I do my mind is ruled thoughts of you. So baby this song is my love letter. Cause when I look at you my heart starts to flutter
When I look at you my spine sends out a quick shudder.
Jan. 19 at 7:12 pm
I like it :) When i read it i think of how i am. And how i do the same thing. I can't wait till you finish it so i can read the rest.
Jan. 19 at 7:13 pm
Totally i will :) Thank you for looking at mine
Feb. 2 at 12:39 am
Yeppers, if AND ONLY IF you comment on mine. Just kidding!!! I will totally and happily comment, rate, and love your work.
