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Jan. 19 at 1:18 pm

(It's a really rough draft, but I want to know if you guys think it's a good one to pursue. Is the emotion there?)
 
The break between twilight and dreaming
That’s where we met
I couldn’t sing,
You gave me a song
Flight didn’t seem impossible after all
The Fates thought we were in over our heads
Red roses for love, black for death
Off like a little white bird, your soul flew
Right into the sunset, leaving me here
But I stole the Fates magic shears

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