Teen Ink
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TeenInk How would you rearrange this old cliche? "You can catch more flies with honey than with vinegar" http://t.co/xTNZxcKYxK
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TeenInk "Thinking is the best way to travel." - The Moody Blues http://t.co/5jzE5kVJyB
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TeenInk If this is the ending of the story, what is the beginning? http://t.co/gRzPosYXRi
invisible girl
that's me
no one can see me
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
no one can hear me
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
the ghost of darkness
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
proud of it
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
imbrasing it
invisible
is me
I like this poem. I like how the is me's, and the that's me's are almost nagging the reader, like the invisible girl is trying to be heard, dispite the fact that she's also proud she is invisible. Very well done, keep writing!
this is the best poem every i am a big fan luv diz poem <3 . <3
