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mommy13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Jan. 21 at 6:42 pm

invisible girl
that's me
no one can see me
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
no one can hear me
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
the ghost of darkness
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
proud of it
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
imbrasing it
invisible
is me

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Anna141This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 24 at 1:10 pm

I like this poem. I like how the is me's, and the that's me's are almost nagging the reader, like the invisible girl is trying to be heard, dispite the fact that she's also proud she is invisible. Very well done, keep writing!

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purplehani replied...
Jan. 24 at 6:05 pm

i feel like you repeat "me" too much

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mommy13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 29 at 3:52 pm

thanks for being honest

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mommy13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 29 at 4:10 pm

this is the best poem every i am a big fan luv diz poem <3 . <3

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PandaBearLouise15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 29 at 7:39 pm

I LOVE IT
 

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mommy13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 31 at 3:48 pm

thanks for your comments

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Hourglass replied...
Feb. 1 at 2:15 pm

 Wonderful poem 

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moe-moe14This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 4 at 3:53 pm

thank you all

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