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Jan. 24 at 11:28 pm
Darling, darling
(dear oh dear)
Tell me somethin' special
(here)
Set it on the street to sun
(but carry it in quick! before it runs!)
Fill it to the full with rain
(and load it with love, lipstick stains)
Smear it through with a painted cloud
(or hide it high above our frowns)
'Cause darling, darling
(dear oh dear)
Your words are ones not all can
(hear)
*Feedback, please? (: Constructive criticism? Comments?*
Jan. 25 at 10:02 am
This is really creative with very thoughtful rythmes i like it.
