Teen Ink
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TeenInk How would you rearrange this old cliche? "You can catch more flies with honey than with vinegar" http://t.co/xTNZxcKYxK
Fri May 24, 2013 10:17am Reply Retweet Favorite
TeenInk "Thinking is the best way to travel." - The Moody Blues http://t.co/5jzE5kVJyB
Thu May 23, 2013 10:55am Reply Retweet Favorite
TeenInk If this is the ending of the story, what is the beginning? http://t.co/gRzPosYXRi
Smash the cold clocks
Trash the dials of light
Douse the Sun
Shroud the Moon in its own darkness
Have all measurements of time destroyed
Erased
Forgotten
Never to be recreated
Have space stop in mid-step
Let me remain in his arms
Kept in this lucid dream
Forever suspended in this sweet fantasy
Keep me away from the end
The sorrowful regrets
The imprint of his lips covered in my hidden by my lonely tears
Stop
The
Time
Interesting! I really had to contemplate this one to figure out what it meant to me.
You've got a really nice writing style, especially at the beginning. Your metaphors at the beginning are just impeccable. Great job.
