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AmyLeighThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Jan. 26 at 2:52 pm

I'm fairly new to this website so I don't have much work up yet, but I'll be adding more soon. I would LOVE to give feedback to any poems/song lyrics anyone has, and would really appreciate any comments on the poems I've already uploaded!

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BeckSunflowerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 26 at 11:00 pm

I would love to help you out with that. But before i do, i am a very honest person. I would never tell you anythng sucked because no poem does as long as you put you essence into into it but the constructive criticism might be more than you bargained for. But if that is alright with you, I'd be happy to.

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RolledthestoneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 27 at 10:49 am

Tis always my pleasure.

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AmyLeighThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 27 at 11:09 am

i welcome constructive criticism!!! i haven't been writing poetry for very long and i'll take any advice that will help me improve :) thank you so much

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Soccer23This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 27 at 9:15 pm

I gave you some feedback! I like your work do you mind giving me some feedback in my work ? Please and thank you!

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Nicksamson replied...
Jan. 28 at 1:06 pm

I like your poems and gave you some feedback which I felt was necessary. Would you mind giving me some feedback on my poem? It's the only poem i have written till now and a little suggestion might help me create better poems in future.
 

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AmyLeighThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 28 at 7:17 pm

of course!!! thank you so much :)

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twitte14This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 29 at 5:21 pm

I commented on your most recent poem! I would love some feedback from you as well.

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AmyLeighThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 29 at 7:30 pm

thank you very much! i just left some feedback on yours :)

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Lawless-FlameRoseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 30 at 9:15 am

ill give u feedback for feedback on my poem lost in the moment

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AmyLeighThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 30 at 7:38 pm

but of course! and thank you very much.

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TheCapturedBatThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 30 at 7:44 pm

Your poem "Unraveled" is amazing! It is among my favorite poems that I have read on Teen Ink. I would love it if you would read some of my poems and tell me what you think. You are extremely talented!

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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 2 at 12:19 am

I commented on your poem "unraveled" ... Very swell btw. Anyway, if you wanna will you check out my poem, "Daniel"? I can't tell what's wrong with it, but I want to improve my writing! :)

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