Nov. 29, 2012 at 4:25 pm
Anyone who needs feedback on a story can ask me. Id be glad to help! :)
Nov. 29, 2012 at 4:38 pm
Could you read my story(s) I want to go home. and/or Lewis 'Chesty' Puller: Going Where the Guns Are ?
Nov. 29, 2012 at 5:00 pm
Of course! :) I'll get on it as soon as I can.
Nov. 29, 2012 at 6:52 pm
i have two stories that i'd like you to read but if you could take a look at "the Waiting room" and leave a comment that would be greatly appericated.(;
Nov. 30, 2012 at 12:22 pm
I would LOVE it if you would read my story "Before You"! (please) :)
Nov. 30, 2012 at 12:30 pm
COuld you read my story Cupid?
Nov. 30, 2012 at 1:46 pm
Could you please read "In Between Spaces - Chapter 1" in the scifi/fantasy section? Thank you!
Nov. 30, 2012 at 8:57 pm
Coud you please read my short story? It's called Bound; Deaths Story. Thank you!
Nov. 30, 2012 at 9:59 pm
Would you mind reading and critiquing my story "Chronicles Of The Ended Earth"? No ones given me feedback and I'm wondering if I should just scrap it.
Dec. 1, 2012 at 11:46 am
Hi! Could you look at a story called "Outlander". i just posted it and it could use some feedback. I can't really offer feedback on your stories at the moment, but if there's anytihng you want me to see, I'll try to make time for it.
Dec. 1, 2012 at 4:08 pm
Thanks!! I've got a book-story but it's posted by chapter ... its a long sereis though so just read anything that catches your eye :) (if you want to read the book-story it's Drizzle, Tracked, Escape, Kerosene and so on :) ) Thanks again!
Dec. 2, 2012 at 4:31 pm
Would you mind reading and critiquing my book The Ace of Spades? Some feedback would be really helpful on that one. Thanks! :)
Dec. 3, 2012 at 8:01 am
If you read basically anything of mine I'd appreciate it! Thank you so much!
Dec. 3, 2012 at 2:27 pm
If you could read anything of mine, that would be awesome :D
Dec. 6, 2012 at 6:35 pm
It would be great if you could read and comment on any of my short stories, "The Script" in particular. Thanks!
Dec. 7, 2012 at 1:30 am
Could you read my story? I'd really appreciate it! Just click link http://www.teenink.com/college_guide/college_essays/article/497260/Reverse-Psycology/
Dec. 7, 2012 at 6:16 am
Hey! I have a short story that I'm looking to publish, and I was wondering if you would give me some feedback on it?
Dec. 8, 2012 at 6:36 pm
Thank you so much for offering feed-back! This is really nice of you! I will definitely read some of your work.
I have a short story called "She is a Dancer". If you enjoy it, I have lots of other pieces posted.
Thanks again!
--KnitsAndPurls
Dec. 8, 2012 at 8:51 pm
Please view my poems. Thaks
Dec. 10, 2012 at 8:18 am
Hello! I have a short story that needs some feedback on it. It apparently is getting quite popular on here, but no one is commenting!! It's called "When We Are Together- A Ronnie and Julius Story". Thanks!