Nov. 4, 2012 at 1:22 pm
Hey, so here's the scoop. I love reading written pieces, no matter your skill, genre, etc. So, post your stuff here (links or no, doesn't matter) and I'll take a look!
:D
Nov. 16, 2012 at 4:11 pm
http://teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/504922/Saved/
http://teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/505495/-Mom-/
Nov. 17, 2012 at 12:04 pm
Anything ya like, buddy. Literally. Anything:P
Nov. 24, 2012 at 9:36 pm
Anything that looks good to you sounds good to me :)
Feb. 28 at 6:17 am
Hi! Could you read my story Into Oblivion? THANKS!!!
Mar. 1 at 7:28 pm
Hi! Could you look at some of my poems? I'd appreciate any comments or feedback! Thanks!
Mar. 2 at 2:02 pm
I really dont know how to use this site yet, but if you can look at my work somehow that would be great. I am not sure how else to get people to check out the poems I have made. I'm hoping you'll like them. please let me know. thank you.
-Jerry Najera
Mar. 3 at 2:33 pm
could you read my essay on Bullying?
thank you so much!
Mar. 4 at 1:53 pm
http://teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/530444/True-Delights/
This is a piece I constantly revise, in this piece I want to send the emotions of confusion, imagination, creativity, and other (almost child-like emotions) to my readers. This is the 2nd time I had posted this piece, this is the most recent revision, and I would love some critique and critisism, (specifics would be nice) and also tell me what you like. Try and give advice that would go along the lines of enhancing the emotions I mentioned earlier, and maybe even ideas for better words. Thank you so much and I hope you will give some deep and helpful feedback!
Mar. 8 at 5:27 pm
I think you have already read some of my early poems. and thank you by the way for the encouraging comments. Can you read some of my other peices. Getting feedback means so much to me, because it encourages me to further develop my future work, as pitiful as that may sound. Just click my username and check out my stuff.
Apr. 10 at 6:50 pm
http://www.teenink.com/nonfiction/personal_experience/article/539284/Haunted/
Apr. 10 at 6:51 pm
http://www.teenink.com/nonfiction/personal_experience/article/539284/Haunted/
Apr. 12 at 3:07 pm
Hey! remember me? Well I have some new pieces out since the last time you looked at my stuff and I was wondering if you would look at them and tell me what you think. Please and Thanky You :)
Apr. 12 at 7:17 pm
Can you read this and give me feedback? Thank You! http://www.teenink.com/nonfiction/academic/article/532017/Standardized-Testing-Its-Time-to-Smell-the-Coffee/
Apr. 16 at 7:26 am
www.teenink.com/fiction/realistic_fiction/article/537494/Becoming-Someone/
Thank you!
Apr. 16 at 7:27 am
Anything of mine, I think you'll particularily enjoy "Becoming Someone". Thank you :)
Apr. 19 at 5:34 pm
You can read any of mine. (:
I wrote a personal essay, a short story, and a fan/nonfiction article. Have at it!
Apr. 22 at 6:38 pm
My new peice A Victim of a Gun please??? Thanks!
Apr. 24 at 11:04 am
I only wrote one thing.
Apr. 24 at 3:59 pm
You can read anything of mine. Please!