Meth 
Someone I know used this dangerous drug. “I would sit in the dark for hours just writing nonsense. I couldn’t watch TV because the shows didn’t make any sense,” she said. Her nose often bled, another side effect. Weight loss and scabbing, two of the most drastic and noticeable effects of meth, result from the chemical mixtures that eat away at users’ insides, and the hallucinated bugs that they see crawling everywhere cause them to scratch or pick at their skin.
Even more fatal consequences of this drug are STDs and AIDS; some users are willing to sell their bodies in exchange for the four- to 18-hour high. Users may even steal from their closest friends and family. Being a meth addict is like taking a pound of flesh because it not only consumes those who use it but also all that is dear to them.
I thought this piece was good, but its lacking substance. The facts are great and thats what your piece seems to be moving around. I think that maybe you should try appealing to the readers' emotions more. Uhmmmm, oh yeah, the conclusion was rather abrupt and could use more development. Otherwise, good job.
very nice article..really opens the eyes of someone who is not aware of drug affects
Good article, but you need to put more emotion in it. Write more about the person you know who did meth. Otherwise, very good.
This is a good article but it sounds too much like a research paper. It is a really good article otherwise.
Very informative, but lacks pathos. The story about your friend tells me you are very passionate on the subject, but the work doesn't portray that to me.
Dec. 15, 2008 at 2:45 am:
I thought this was very infomative but it sounds like you're just copying and pasting information from a brochure. I think this article could use a stronger ending statement.
Nov. 3, 2008 at 2:02 pm:
this was the best that i ever read..tells us about what it is about and how bad it can or is











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