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no higher luv

May 24, 2009
By Anonymous

You’re my sun
You’re my rain
You’re my joy
You’re my pain
You’re the boy
I’m the girl
Living life in a complex world

Love me right
Love me wrong
Put my name in your songs
U will never be forgotten
For my loves way to strong

Can’t say nothing even matters
For deep inside I really care
And where my heart once laid
I put it right back there

I’m in a condition cuz I’m missin
That one special man
Don’t want anybody else
For they can’t love me like you can
We’ll commit in time
Go through our rain and our shine
Breaking up that’s fine
We’ll make up every time

Never slip through fingertips or any cracks
Cuz when you’re up against the wall
You know I got your back

I’m your Bonnie
You’re my Clyde
Together we will ride
And when the dramas put aside
All our love will collide

No one can take me through the things that we’ve been through
So when it’s all said and done I’ll never be through will you.
For there is no higher luv.

The author's comments:
this piece derived from lyrics i created for a song. Later I decided to convert it into a unique form of poetry.

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on Aug. 20 2010 at 3:17 pm
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
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the rhyming is awesome, but the rhythm is sort of back and forth. um... sort of irregular. but  really nice, overall.

on Feb. 11 2010 at 9:57 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
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Favorite Quote:
I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it."

OMG. best poem i've seen in a long time! i looooove it! check out my work? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/168414/Heart-on-Fire/