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Winter MAG
June 16, 2009
Ice engulfs the grass
Leafless dead trees frosted white
Spotted eyelashes
© Shayla F., Ladoga, IN
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This article has 24 comments.
AMAWHI said...
on May. 21 2012 at 10:20 am
This haiku was great! This poem shows great imagery, I could just picture the snow on the persons eyelashes. The drawing next to the poem was also really good. Great job!
gabbru said...
on May. 21 2012 at 7:35 am
I really liked this Haiku! You used personification in the first line, which really tied it together! nice job(;
rebeckabear BRONZE said...
on Mar. 22 2012 at 3:32 pm
Haiku is a form of Japanese poetry that combine three different lines and a noticeable grammatical break. The break, or kireji, is often replaced with commas or hyphens in English haiku. Haiku usually includes nature and everyday things and situations so don't think too hard about what to use as a topic. this is exactly what is is. i agree with every one you should stay writing because it is very beautful
PoetryAngel14 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 4:40 pm
Great imagery! It made a shiver run down my spine. Wonderful :)
PhilosophicalLinx BRONZE said...
on Nov. 5 2011 at 6:01 pm
i just saw that picture very nice!
TheChessKing said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 12:42 pm
It is short but it is true
Inez1234 said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 10:46 am
simple, but powerfull
dia.dreamer GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 9:49 am
so simple, so beautiful, so powerful and did I mention awesome imagery?? love it!!! simple, but powerful poems are the best poems and yours is one of them!! keep writing... :D
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 26 2011 at 5:35 pm
Amazing haiku, very beautiful:)
youknowwho AQ said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 12:04 pm
Simple,but Good use of imagery.
Beca13 said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 1:27 pm
This is an awesome haiku!
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD said...
on Aug. 27 2010 at 8:16 am
the first line is 5 syllables, the second its 7 syllables, and the third line is also 5. haikus originate from japan, and their special because they tend to be very short, but that makes the meaning come out stronger.
mylifeisafantasy said...
on Aug. 16 2010 at 7:29 am
Haiku is a form of Japanese poetry that combine three different lines and a noticeable grammatical break. The break, or kireji, is often replaced with commas or hyphens in English haiku. Haiku usually includes nature and everyday things and situations so don't think too hard about what to use as a topic. Read more: How to Write a Haiku | eHow.com http://www.ehow.com/how_3336_write-haiku.html#ixzz0wltAHk6W
BlackAngelWings PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 4:51 pm
I have a question, what is a Haiku?
And what makes this 3 sentence piece so...special?
Essa said...
on May. 6 2010 at 1:25 pm
cool, its awesome
hello.beautiful PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 10:13 pm
this is beautiful (:
oxStardustxo SILVER said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 7:29 pm
beautifully written...
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 12 2010 at 7:50 pm
i luv how its so short, yet so deep
