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Walking Through the Woods This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

By Elizabeth R., Auburn, CA

My feet hit the snow as
I walk, the wind blows, homeless
Through trees and my heart

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7 comment(s)
this poem also seems unfinished it seems as if you were about to say something but couldn't cause it was gonna probably a late asignment -sorry
Sep. 13, 2016 at 6:49 PM • Report
Beautiful and solemn haiku. The imagery and meanings behind are so full of different meanings. I love this.
Mar. 07, 2015 at 1:56 PM • Report
wow! That is deep and I can totally relate to this! Read and post comments about my work! Please!
Jan. 18, 2015 at 5:43 PM • Report
short  but  pretty  
Nov. 08, 2012 at 7:33 PM • Report
short but pretty  
Nov. 08, 2012 at 7:33 PM • Report
Blaine W.
I really like this poem. It is written very well. Great job!
Nov. 08, 2012 at 4:02 PM • Report
Hey firefly116! If you're still looking for pure form sonnnets or Haiku to read. Read some of my newest. I think the new ones of mine got VERY properly categorized. At first I used to get so annoyed by bad categorization on here too, but then I learned to live with it. Anyway. I'd love it if you read and told me if you like my sonnet umm wait let me name one for you so its not an agony for you to find one. Oh there's two new ones. "Time: the B*tch" and "welcome winter, my love". Not that new but new in my posts :P The rest are mostly in Haiku form.
Jan. 30, 2014 at 12:28 PM • Report