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Around the Rosie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

By Jose R., Fort Morgan, CO

I take a deep breath and inhale the humid, summer air. My sweaty palms hang at my sides as my fingers play with the laces of my dress. My heart pounds against my chest, and my brain pulsates rapidly. I hear my sister speak, but her words are lost to me. They are unable to surpass the ringing sound that encompasses my lobes.

I do not need to hear her to understand what she's saying. We had run it over and over again as we made our trek to the solitary tree behind our house. A lone swing hangs from its dry branches – put there by our father once upon a dream. The cicadas that cling to the tree's bark fill my ears alongside the ringing sound. I gaze at the dry grass encroaching across the earth; another normal summer day in the blazing heat of July.

My sister clears her throat to get my attention.

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2 comment(s)
This is a really nice story; it's a light sort of sad, the imagery is really nice and the pictures goes well with it too. Good job!
May. 03, 2016 at 4:59 PM • Report
The first paragraph was enough for me to know the beauty of your work. Great job!
Nov. 05, 2012 at 6:09 PM • Report