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September 23, 2009
By Izamar caro BRONZE, Thornton, Colorado
Izamar caro BRONZE, Thornton, Colorado
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I thought that the poem “I Want to be,” was very interesting because it talks about how the author wants to see Pease all around the world. It is very interesting how the author names everything that is good and that he wants to see happening to all the people in every country. They want every one to be happy and have something that makes them feel better. Like having a baby, getting married, and people hugging their loved ones! I thought this was very true, because there are many problems going on all over the world. There are problems between family and friend, economic problems. Ii thought it meant that we should all see everything positive and just be happy with everything that’s around us.



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