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By BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time., Jacksonville, FL

When it rains
It washes away
What’s wet and what
The wetness stained
And drowns what came
To cause me pain
And keep me up
All night and day
And possibly take
My life away
19 horses and 19 men
Knocking on my window pane
And when it rains
It tells the day
No one can come out to play
And that makes the sun say
“I must now dry up the day
And save whats left to be saved”.
And when I look
I have to say
That what I see I can’t explain
What was flooded yesterday
Is now completely drained
And when I say
The sun has came
To shine its rays
On my troubled face
And liven what relentless rain
Had no remorse and washed away
-19 horses and 19 men
Knocking on my window pane.

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17 comment(s)
you are such a good poet!
Apr. 17, 2013 at 6:16 PM • Report
Simply outstanding. I too short of words to compliment this poem. 
Apr. 08, 2013 at 3:32 PM • Report
That... is amazing
Mar. 27, 2013 at 1:31 PM • Report
Ooh....thankment muchly!!!
Mar. 28, 2013 at 6:56 PM • Report
This poem is amazing, I'm practically in love with it!! I especially like the rhyming scheme - It makes the poem flow very easily
Feb. 27, 2013 at 7:33 PM • Report
HasntWrittenInages W.
you are so fabulous for commentating. Thx so much.
Feb. 28, 2013 at 11:28 PM • Report
Really liked it, as soon as I saw the title , just knew, HAD to read it...the best thing is the ryhming scheme, beautiful, a very nice interpretation of rain... 
Jan. 12, 2013 at 4:12 AM • Report
Thank you so much for commentating. I hope you did your dance.
Jan. 13, 2013 at 12:09 AM • Report
Why, You're Welcome!!
Jan. 13, 2013 at 9:47 AM • Report
This poem flowed as easy as rain ;) But seriously, amazing job! I totally get your metaphor! It's unique and very creative and deep :) Great job!
Dec. 25, 2012 at 6:49 PM • Report