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A Somber Memory

Mary Delle S., N/A, Philippines By BloodyMaryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time., N/A, Philippines

There on my bed, I crouched with my pillow
Lying awake, feeling so willow
A thousand tears falling on my cheeks
Hearing the screams, ears couldn't be fixed
Behind the wall, somebody wept
Begging to go, I couldn’t forget
I stood on my bed and peeped on a hole
And saw dark eyes as black as a charcoal
A man clenched his hand into a fist
Jabbed a woman, she fell at ease
He yelled and screeched again and again
Nobody recognized the woman’s pain

Her face went red and purple
Body so helpless, so feeble
The man’s hands never impeded
This woman having no shield,

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4 comment(s)
Zach_M
A mixture of points tied in perfectly with one another, and although I thought the message was fairly odd, it provided a great message. Wonderful job
Aug. 24, 2013 at 3:24 AM • Report
BalladOfMonaLisa
Very well done, although the end was a little confusing. Loved it! (:
Aug. 24, 2013 at 3:23 AM • Report
Kenzico
that poem give me shivers, its very powerful and you used strong words to convey the idea. great work! it does sound like a nightmere tho. scary
Jul. 26, 2013 at 9:26 AM • Report
TheElement
The rythm is perfectly timed and all the points mix into each other.  Great Poem!
Jul. 19, 2013 at 11:03 AM • Report
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