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Name on the Wind

By bree_bree, Auburn, KY

From behind sleeps smokey veil
she looked upon his face,
a face without definition,
yet one she longed to touch
to caress and to kiss.

Never before had she seen him
yet in her heart she knew him,
she knew his very thoughts
shared his every longing,
she didn't need his name.

He held his prefect hand out to her
calling her with his need
as she stretched out for his embrace,
her name falling from his lips
resting gently on her ears.

she cried her nameless love,
burning to whisper her love,
to hear him whisper his,
his arms opened to take her forever in his embrace.

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2 comment(s)
Mckay
Wow! My mind literally exploded at the amazing ending of this poem. Absolutely amazing. 
May. 31, 2013 at 1:48 PM • Report
bree_bree
You make me blush :) it was an almost complicated peice,i tryed to write it so that the ending wouldnt been seen and that the feeling through out the poem was not really a sad one, that way the sudden ending would have the greatest affect. Glad to know that it worked.
Jun. 05, 2013 at 5:30 PM • Report
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