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By PaulMental, Oshkosh, WI

I am a bad poem.

I rhyme, sometimes.

It seems awkward, right?

I struggle with a simple

A A A A rhyme style.

I contain no smoothness or elegance;
I lack any idea of alliteration or consonance.
The paper has many cross outs, and you can’t really read the ?????Some lines look like they’ve been mangled
and robbed of all structure,
ad evry wrd spellt rong looses identatee.
I have no meaning.
Similes and metaphors go out the door
and suffer
like literature in a hurricane.

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