Wow thank you! The commas after every line and semicolon ending every stanza is just how I format my poetry. Before I started to write on my computer, I would write poems on my phone whenever I was on the road or wherever and felt inspired, I would just write what I felt. I used the commas to distinguish lines and the semicolons to distinguish stanzas. I really appreciate you taking the time to read my work. Thank you :)

Wow, this piece is absolutely beautiful. I'm such a grammar nerd, but I love the way that you used the commas after each line even if they were unnecessary and how each stanza ended with a semicolon. It really brought a unique flair to the cadence and the piece as a whole. Also, the words itself were lovely. I was expecting an ending that was a bit different, perhaps something concerning how the story that you had been told your whole life had all been a lie and that led you to a sort of depression-like state; I'm glad that you ended it this way, which seems a bit less tragic and with even a sense of resignation. All in all, a beautiful piece, thank you!