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The Less Fortunate

By JessicaQ, North Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

The less fortunate
Teardrops rolling down their cheeks
As they lay hungry

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So you stick to Haikus? Well I really admire them but find it difficult to write some myself, I do write poetry but Haiku is very challenging as it's not hard to expand anything only hard to compress it so that it retains its meaning, in fact makes the theme come out clearer, and is comprehensive,..maybe I'll write a Haiku as good as this some day....Good work. 
Jan. 28, 2013 at 7:19 AM • Report