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Excuse Me.....

By DanielM, kent, WA

Excuse me
I’ve got something to say
And when I’m done
I Promise you
You’ll be happy that you stayed

This is just a little something
I wrote only for you
And we’ve been friends for so long now
It’s time that I tell you this

Before I’ll even tell you this
It’ll be over, said and done
So why don’t we seize the moment; freeze it and own it.
Why don’t we begin?

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3 comment(s)
Amazing 1St poem! CX
May. 18, 2014 at 5:19 PM • Report
That's a really good start for a first poem. I can tell you're an advanced writer. I like your diction a lot; it made the character of the poem. Nice job. That's impressive for a first try!
Apr. 24, 2014 at 10:35 AM • Report
I love it! It is an amazing 1st poem! Good job :D
Oct. 21, 2012 at 1:50 AM • Report