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For Those Who Know

By nmk1128, Fort Myers, FL

Mass connection of wants and needs
Mass dependance on brainwashing screens
Mass equality of all beings
Identical, indifferent, eyes that gleam
Shades of hate and love
Of forgiveness and regret
Forever imprinted by those we forget

Minority mirrors the masses and reflects it's own image
Sculpts it's memorial with the unmemorable minion
Upon the brainwashed it feeds
Manipulating the blind
Castrating the see
A matter unmattering to the mass, unseen

For those mutating from the mass
Prepare to matter
Prepare to decide
Prepare the clock work of society as it ticks in your hand

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10 comment(s)
Really good word choices! I like the rhythm and the rhyme. Good job!
Feb. 23, 2013 at 9:57 PM • Report
Interesting. Also good vocabulary. :P
Jan. 28, 2013 at 6:48 AM • Report
thank you! glad it peaked your interest
Jan. 28, 2013 at 11:22 AM • Report
Well, I'm glad too 'cause it's really hard to find something that interests me nowadays plus something that I agree with and like :D
Jan. 29, 2013 at 5:58 AM • Report
Loved it alot interesting it makes me think
Jan. 16, 2013 at 11:13 AM • Report
I'm glad (: that's what I like to do
Jan. 28, 2013 at 11:21 AM • Report
I really like this poem but some of it is a bit confusing to read. You might want t tweak th last paragraph a little bit. 
Jan. 14, 2013 at 11:08 AM • Report
What confuses? and yea I've got that before, but I don't know, I like it. 
Jan. 14, 2013 at 3:20 PM • Report
Oh the only confusing part was in the last paragraph, but if you like it please leave it like it is. The only thing that is truly important about poetry is that the author is happy with it. So please keep it thois if you like it!
Jan. 14, 2013 at 7:03 PM • Report
In a way its saying how if you decide to stray away from the pack that follows the few you will be scrutinized and you will be target and opposed, but through this opression you will have a greater impact than any of the those that stay in the mass. Thank you for your advice and I appreciate your comments and your reading of my poems.
Jan. 14, 2013 at 9:36 PM • Report