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Between Raindrops

Emily B., Woodbine, MD By EPluribusUnum, Woodbine, MD

In the silence between raindrops
I can let my mind wander.
It dreams of ultraviolet love
Waiting to escape the clouds
And skewer me in my openness.

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13 comment(s)
I love the imagery, the simplicity. As soon as I read the first line, my mind shut off everything i was thinking in order to grasp the subtle beauty of your poem.
Mar. 18, 2013 at 2:06 PM • Report
Aww thanks!
Mar. 18, 2013 at 8:21 PM • Report
This is so nice...sweet subtle and serene. I like it.
Feb. 13, 2013 at 1:47 PM • Report
Thank you. I wrote it about the confusing feelings I was having at the begining of a relationship and how they just kinda canceled each other out until I was left with the promise of being able to let someone in and the fear of letting someone hurt me.
Feb. 14, 2013 at 9:41 PM • Report
Well, I guess I didn't get it from your point of view but I suppose that's what poetry is, huh ...different interpretations to different people......It is still beautiful though with the new light shed..
Feb. 15, 2013 at 11:17 AM • Report
Short and sweet, just how I like it (: Good words, reminds me of the randomness that I like to write about. Ultraviolet is a cool word
Feb. 11, 2013 at 7:13 PM • Report
Thanks! :D I love any excuse to use fantabulous words!
Feb. 12, 2013 at 2:13 PM • Report
WOW, I love this! I don't really have anything to sugest I like it as it is. I wouldn't touch it!
Jan. 10, 2013 at 2:51 PM • Report
That means a lot, thanks :3
Jan. 15, 2013 at 10:09 PM • Report
Nice ,I liked how you used 'Raindrops' and expressed your feelings.
Nov. 28, 2012 at 4:39 AM • Report