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Unspoken Forest

By writer3499, New Bedford, MA

The white feathers
cover the ground like a blanket
keeping it sheltered
and hidden.
The setting sun
casts long shadows
over the quiet forest.
Tree limbs grab
at the leaves slowly drifting
The wind whispers things
into the peaceful air
carrying messages from place to place
And adding little comments ?that the unspoken forest
doesn’t dare utter

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3 comment(s)
Great imagery! Amazing work! It would mean a lot if you looked at my work and let me know what you think. Thanks!
Jan. 13, 2013 at 11:05 AM • Report
I really enjoyed reading this poem.  Beautiful imagery of nature was conveyed through your word choice.  I would appreciate if you could check out some of my work on this site.  Thank you. 
Dec. 18, 2012 at 6:57 PM • Report
Very nice. One of the few times when no rhyming does not hinder what i think about the poem. loved the imagery with the white feathers. Would appreciate it if people would put feedback on my poem Because I'm Dead.
Dec. 14, 2012 at 3:49 AM • Report