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Wrong Words

By angel_of_silence, cotulla, TX

I wish i could get over
This problem bothering me
It has to do with a friend of mine
And what will come to be

You see i think I said wrong words
Except I do not know
Because of my bad memory
The words are as blank as snow

So now I tell the problem
Though I did not mean what i said
My friend no longer trust me
and for that I am sad

My friend has the right to be mad
But if only he let me explain
That if he told me what i said
I could make things right again

I don't remember what I said
But here's the funny thing

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2 comment(s)
yeah, it was a bit too structured, I mean, i'm partisal to free-verse, but sometimes I do stuff that's really structured.
Dec. 18, 2012 at 5:26 PM • Report
i like this. d'you think maybe the rythmn is a lil too structured? ( maybe its just me, lol) but again, i gave it 5/5!
Dec. 18, 2012 at 11:46 AM • Report