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Me & My Broken Heart

Zoya K., Gujranwala, Pakistan By Zoya_Khan, Gujranwala, Pakistan

I was just asking,
Just asking you,
But in fact I was begging,
Begging you,

To give me a chance,
I wanna prove myself,
Your answer was 'NO',
And I felt,

Like a bad dream,
I wished it wasn't real,
Cos' I always thought that,
You'd understand what I feel,

I was so fool to think,
That my dreams will come true,
And now I'm drowning in tears,
And the reason is you...

You broke my heart,
And here on the floor,
I can see a million of pieces,

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12 comment(s)
You had stanza's that really stood out. Great work!
Nov. 05, 2013 at 9:36 AM • Report
We all support you and your work, because you are ambitious. 
Jan. 13, 2013 at 8:14 AM • Report
Thank u :) :) :)
Jan. 13, 2013 at 10:11 AM • Report
off course they supporting u just faith in HIM & keep patient!!!! i also pray 4 u. . .
Jan. 07, 2013 at 8:49 AM • Report
Thank u so much 4 ur prayers honey :) :) :)
Jan. 07, 2013 at 9:30 AM • Report
it reminds me of things i have wrote before, its agreat poem  i love it it has alot of feelings in it but maybe you can try sepereating them a little; it a great poem; Keep writing!!
Dec. 26, 2012 at 3:04 PM • Report
Thank u so much :) :) :)
Dec. 27, 2012 at 3:05 AM • Report
wow just wow i think that this poem was well written and had a clear meaning
Dec. 26, 2012 at 3:03 PM • Report
Thank u soooo much...!!!
Dec. 27, 2012 at 2:45 AM • Report
Thank you so much for your comments and support. Love y'all :) :) :)
Dec. 22, 2012 at 10:27 AM • Report