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Rain This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

Krista P., Tamuning, Guam By KristaLove, Tamuning, Guam

I watch as they fall
How content they seem to be
Once they kiss the Earth

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5 comment(s)
I like your poem but I only gave 3 star because it so short. The ideas should really be expanded upon
Jan. 02, 2013 at 2:37 PM • Report
Thats whats called a haiku.
Jan. 02, 2013 at 10:43 PM • Report
Those are some very nice words!  Love it!
Jan. 01, 2013 at 6:32 PM • Report
I like the word choice you used! Ive never heard anyone describe rain like you did! Excellent! Please read, comment, and rate some of my poems too! I would appreciate it:) thanks
Jan. 01, 2013 at 5:56 PM • Report
Short and to the point with imagry on top. Very nice
Jan. 01, 2013 at 1:56 PM • Report