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Alone in a Room Full of People on a Tuesday Evening

Amy P., Pompton Lakes, NJ By AmyLeigh, Pompton Lakes, NJ

she stretched her hand out towards the static
hearing the whispers retreat into their hollow shells

and that was the time she decided to love herself
because she figured somebody had to

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2 comment(s)
Nice! I liked it. but i think you need to add a few more paras so as to make it more interesing and fun to read.
Jan. 28, 2013 at 1:01 PM • Report
thank you! i kind of wanted this to be a shorter poem because i think i conveyed everything i wanted in the 2 stanzas i had, but i totally get what you're saying and when i'm editing i'll see if adding a few more is the way i want to go! :)
Jan. 28, 2013 at 6:54 PM • Report