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The Rain

Natalie P., Carmichael, CA By EnnaGirl, Sacramento, CA

Rain
I’m so lonely
I think I could burst
My heart aches
The butterflies inside my chest screaming
Giant monsters tearing at my flesh
Cold metal lying across my bare skin
The pain
The cold hard pain
Rain pours down
I cannot stop the rush
I cannot stay the flood
Red dances before my eyes
Spots of red inside the haze
But the pain does not stop
The tears roll down my skin
The salty tang filling my mouth
Laughter echoes in my ears
I do not see them
I do not see the tormentors
They do not understand
What it is like to bear the weight of the rains
They do not know how to cease the flow of the raging waterfalls

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7 comment(s)
WickedWriter
very surreal. I little hard to keep up with but i loved the imagery keep on writing! ~the wicked writer
Feb. 13, 2013 at 9:23 PM • Report
EnnaGirl
thanks wicked!!! ^_^
Feb. 13, 2013 at 9:30 PM • Report
WriterWannaBe
I really enjoyed the emotion in this piece...literally gave me chills!!! Nice work and keep writing! (=
Feb. 13, 2013 at 9:21 PM • Report
EnnaGirl
Thankyou so much!!! and i will read ur poem ^_^  
Feb. 27, 2013 at 6:30 PM • Report
EmmettHerculeLaFave
Awesome imagery; makes it surreal. 5/5.
Feb. 03, 2013 at 9:22 PM • Report
Aprilis_Angel
Nice one. i 'heart' it. :) keep it up!
Feb. 12, 2013 at 7:23 AM • Report
EnnaGirl
thankyou so much!!!!
Feb. 13, 2013 at 7:36 PM • Report
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