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The Rain

Natalie P., Carmichael, CA By EnnaGirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time., Sacramento, CA

I’m so lonely
I think I could burst
My heart aches
The butterflies inside my chest screaming
Giant monsters tearing at my flesh
Cold metal lying across my bare skin
The pain
The cold hard pain
Rain pours down
I cannot stop the rush
I cannot stay the flood
Red dances before my eyes
Spots of red inside the haze
But the pain does not stop
The tears roll down my skin
The salty tang filling my mouth
Laughter echoes in my ears
I do not see them
I do not see the tormentors
They do not understand
What it is like to bear the weight of the rains
They do not know how to cease the flow of the raging waterfalls

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7 comment(s)
very surreal. I little hard to keep up with but i loved the imagery keep on writing! ~the wicked writer
Feb. 13, 2013 at 9:23 PM • Report
thanks wicked!!! ^_^
Feb. 13, 2013 at 9:30 PM • Report
I really enjoyed the emotion in this piece...literally gave me chills!!! Nice work and keep writing! (=
Feb. 13, 2013 at 9:21 PM • Report
Thankyou so much!!! and i will read ur poem ^_^  
Feb. 27, 2013 at 6:30 PM • Report
Awesome imagery; makes it surreal. 5/5.
Feb. 03, 2013 at 9:22 PM • Report
Nice one. i 'heart' it. :) keep it up!
Feb. 12, 2013 at 7:23 AM • Report
thankyou so much!!!!
Feb. 13, 2013 at 7:36 PM • Report