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Make Me

By Basya44, Brighton, MA

Make me
I want to be pushed, and shoved, and destroyed
By you, and only by you
Yes it sounds twisted.
It is twisted.
But only you can make me
Only you can make me make something
Only you can make me blush
Make me smile
Make me cry
Only you can make me scream
Make me moan
Make me wonder
Don't just stand there,
Make me.
Make me into ME
The “me” that I need to be.
You are the only one who can make me
Make me try
Make me fail
Take control. Control me.
You can make me safe
Make me whisper
Make me sob
Make me shudder-
Shudders of pain

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3 comment(s)
It was amazing it made you think more on the essence of lvoe and the magic behind what young couples like others said feel it wys just amazing
Mar. 24, 2013 at 12:04 AM • Report
wow that was completely amazing. you captured the essense of love. you perfectly decribed what millions of young couples feel. I can relate to this story because that is how my girlfriend makes me feel :) so thanks for writing such a beautiful piece of poetry
Feb. 28, 2013 at 4:47 PM • Report
This is beautiful. The use of those two words is so are a fantastic writer!!
Feb. 05, 2013 at 11:41 PM • Report