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Can I tell you something?

Dori M., Gastonia, NC By thankyoumrsloopner, Gastonia, NC

-Can I tell you something?

-Uh huh.

-'Cause we're been seeing each other for a real long time...

-Uh huh...

-And I really like you...

-Uh huh...

-And I think you like me...

-Uh huh.

-So I'm going to tell you something I've been wanting to tell you for a while now...I love you.

-...uh huh.

-Is that all you're going to say? I just told you I loved you for the first time, and all you have to say is "uh huh?"

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1 comment(s)
That's amazing! I love the way you told it entirely in dialogue and still managed to make it so vivid & make it seem like we know the characters even though we never even hear their names. Great job!
Mar. 07, 2013 at 7:52 PM • Report