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Perfect Twist

March 15, 2013
By kaywon BRONZE, Sacramento, California
kaywon BRONZE, Sacramento, California
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There is a love I cannot have today,
Because of the ocean it is not love
I drown in feelings of hurt to the bay
And fly away far away like a dove.
Ask me why I’m so different now?
I’ll hide in the tide of hate from you
Because loving you I cannot allow
The tragic story of the perfect two.
Tell me you love me but you’re lying
Why do you lie if you know I’m the one?
You hurt me on and on and I’m crying
This is a stupid love and I’m so done.
In my life today love no longer exists
This is our perfect love story twist


The author's comments:
The theme is a love story with a twist. The title of the poem develops the sonnet that talks about being in love with someone who no longer feels the same. As for the final couplets, they convey the final decision of someone who gives up for their “perfect” love story.

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