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Makayla W., Quakertown, PA By fallenoutofgrace, Quakertown, PA

heart
How can I give my heart when I'm afraid,
How can I look to you and feel trust,
I am crumbling,broken I feel nothing,
But when I see you my heart aches again,
Why do you do this to me?
I don't know I am heartless,
My heart turning to scars and dust,
It beats but not feel, who am I?
I don't know I am different,
You changed me but to better to worse no one will know,
I look to you and my eyes with tears sparkle,
you are me and I am you but how do I tell you,
that your everything that you,
How can a tree shed it's leaves if it knows it will die,
how can the sea make waves that could destroy everything,

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12 comment(s)
Janelle7
all i can say is wow! this is so relateable im almost crying! Thanks so much for this poem!
Jan. 24, 2014 at 5:12 PM • Report
Kenzico
yes this is amazing youre amazing and I connect so much to this right now! I wrote one or 2 about the same thing! keep writing!
Aug. 01, 2013 at 12:38 PM • Report
swat17
Wow, this is great. I love the message. You do an awesome job writing free verse!
Apr. 17, 2013 at 9:07 PM • Report
swat17
Wow, this is great. I love the message. You do a great job with free verse!
Apr. 17, 2013 at 9:06 PM • Report
YellowRose79
:O can I like frame this? It's gorgeous. I love being able to read something that I can relate to, but that doesn't happen very often, but here is one of those rare pieces!
Apr. 15, 2013 at 4:53 PM • Report
Fallenoutofgrace
sure you can frame it lol :P
Apr. 17, 2013 at 9:08 PM • Report
Hanban12
Wow...................... Speechless. Three words...... WRITE> MORE<PLEASE!!!! Ur sooo talented!  
Apr. 15, 2013 at 4:51 PM • Report
LexusMarie
Hello! These lines are priceless.. "How can a tree shed it's leaves if it knows it will die,
how can the sea make waves that could destroy everything,
how can love be trusted once you've been betrayed,
how can I let you in when I'm afraid to fall." You are an AMAZING writer. I felt all the emotion and hard work put into this. This is truly something special. Great job! You're great! Xx!
Apr. 03, 2013 at 8:23 PM • Report
Fallenoutofgrace
Thank you :3
Apr. 03, 2013 at 8:51 PM • Report
Fallenoutofgrace
thanks i really apprehiate this :3
Apr. 03, 2013 at 4:32 PM • Report
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